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First human drawing that actually LOOKS like a human x3

Please don't be too harsh, this was just a doodle, but I'd like some critique on the body, I'm having SO much trouble with it o.e

Feedback please!!
Feedback = Things to improve on/things I did well/Your opinion/ect
Image size
720x960px 232.81 KB
Make
Apple
Model
iPod touch
Shutter Speed
1/30 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
250
Date Taken
Feb 10, 2012, 7:38:28 PM
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Very cute! xD
Although Im curious as to how this looks like a human, when he has a tail and cat ears (i think)? Or do you mean the body looks humanoid? I think that is what you're trying to say.

Anyways, if you want the body to be a bit more proportionally accurate, I'd suggest making the arms longer, and the legs even longer. If you look at yourself and keep your arms to your sides, your hands should stop at the midway of your thigh. In your picture, the hands seem to only end slightly lower than the hips, so the arms are a bit short.

I really like the shading work, it makes the subject pop out, especially the ears and eyes. :)